He was violent
He made her cry
He was sad
He depressed her
He was loud
He made her silent
He was agressive
He frightened her
He was faceless
He stole her
Read Embrace (sequel of this piece)
In response to Daily Prompt- Faceless
(Photo from Google Images)
Very nice. 🙂
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Thankyou Beckie ❤
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Exactly what being in an abusive relationship feels like.
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I’m sorry if you’ve faced anything like this.
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Thank you. Praise God, I survived.
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I’m glad you survived it. Hugs and love ❤
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Always such a pleasure to read your poems
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Thanks Lawrence 🙂
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You’re very welcome
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Wow! This describes Co-dependence..two peoples feelings and responses interconnected, beautifully. I could see this poem in one of my psychology journals! ❤️
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Thanks Maggie! Would love to know how you view it through your psychology journal.. 🙂
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I meant it belongs in a psychology journal it’s so good but I have no idea how you would submit it! 😊❤️
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Oh my God! This is such a huge compliment! Thankyou so much! ❤
I also don’t know how to submit. If you get to know, do lemme know 😉
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Oh my God! This is such a huge compliment! Thankyou so much! ❤
I also don't know how to submit. If you get to know, do lemme know 😉
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I hope she found her way back…not nice to be somewhere you don’t belong!
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It was just from my imagination. No real life connections dear. 🙂 But yeah, I do agree with you. It’s not nice to be somewhere you don’t belong.
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Your imagination is a fertile garden… well done on drawing your reader into your thoughts.
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Thankyou! It means a lot to me. I’m glad you could feel my words ❤❤
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Wow.
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Thanks 💙
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Enough said, mate.
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Beautifully constructed. One really gets a strong sense of not just an abusive relationship, but what it may feel like to be someone with nothing learned but hatred and violence. I would love to read a sequel, possibly Faceless experiencing something, and the happenings afterward. Please keep up the wonderful writing 😀 🙂
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Thankyou so much. I hadn’t thought that it could have a sequel. But yeah, I will give it a shot and see if I can come up with something.
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Ah I see. You’re right now I understand the sequel much better. They do go together, the second an inevitable result of the first. Both amazing all the same 😄💜
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Thanks ❤
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